You mocked me last night
Smirking from above her house
As I retreated toward my own.
But hear me, moon,
I will return tonight
And you will not see me leave.
Ask the sun, tomorrow,
What time it was
When he first saw my face.
Ask him what she whispered
While I held her on the porch.
Ask him how long we lingered.
Moon, you of all people
Should know better than to laugh
At the rhythm of the tides.
Comments
Michele McFadden
December 29, 2012
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Blue Moon
I love this poem. I can't wait to see the poem that comes from the next evening. :-)
Neil McKay
December 29, 2012
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Thanks Michele, but some
Thanks Michele, but some poems need to remain in the mind of the poet!
Michele McFadden
December 30, 2012
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Thanks.
This too is okay.
Clayton Medeiros
December 30, 2012
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Lovely thoughts well said
A beautiful idea with a bit of Shakespearean irony for good measure.