hubris

Submitted by Jennifer Dixey on February 10, 2012

i'm going to write a poem
i said
nature laughed
i am a poem
nature said

Comments

Benjamin Gorman

February 10, 2012

i listened
leaves stirred in a breeze
slicing sunlight to golden flakes
landing warm and weightless
i knew it all beautiful

nature added
yes, so are you

Jennifer Dixey

February 21, 2012

slicing sunlight to golden flakes/landing warm and weightless

Perfect evocation of the feeling of summer. Thanks ... I needed that! (Brrr.)