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Submitted by Neil McKay on November 3, 2012

With an inattentive waitress,
And mediocre food,
In a chilly drizzle,
After a long day,
I had the most
Enjoyable time tonight.
With you.

Comments

Clayton Medeiros

November 3, 2012

A very tender love poem. Well done.

Michael Mayhew

November 5, 2012

...in a wonderful way. I don't normally think of poems as having plot twists, but this one sure did.