To begin, the shot itself, that
Thing we endure so that
We shall not have to
Endure, hurts
Like hell
Next, the waiting, so that
This particularly useful
Poison shall have
Time to work
In Deep
After a few quick testing jabs
"Does this hurt?" the
Surgeon begins his
Cutting and
Rasping
I am a whorl of feelings:
Fascination, disgust,
And an intoxicated
Giddiness, that I
Can feel/not feel
The ongoing
Violation
And so it always goes
With buried
Pain
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Michael Mayhew
December 9, 2012
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An experiment
...in minimal editing. Usually I write in word processing software, and sit on it for a while - at least a couple hours, usually a day, sometimes weeks, so I can revise.
This I just wrote. Let's see if I want to tinker, later.
Benjamin Gorman
December 9, 2012
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Been to the dentist, have we?
Hmmm??
Michael Mayhew
December 10, 2012
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The Podiatrist
AND the dentist. But for some reason the podiatrist visit was the one that made me notice again how utterly weird it is to be awake and passive while someone is doing something the should hurt but does not.