Our handball court is
a hot mess
A rutted sand
driveway -
surface
slick as ball
bearings
A crenellated
steel door -
handle jutting
like a rusty
knife
An ancient oak -
limbs grasping
down to block
the play
When our big red ball
strikes there's no telling
where it may careen
We're a bit of a mess
ourselves, my child and
I. We flail at the ball
we skitter and pant
The garage
door booms like a
dime store gong
one ricochet
arcs up high overhead
through the
oak's branches
- clean through -
as if piloted
not a leaf touched
to land
before us
like grace itself
we just watch,
she and I, entranced
and astonished
that such
perfection
could arise from
such
flawed
materials
Comments
joshua mertz
July 14, 2016
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flaws...
That such perfection can come from such flawed material. The human condition. The beauty of stochastic perfection. Difficult to accept and embrace our flaws, until some subtle transcendance. A good poem and strong.
Michael Mayhew
May 3, 2017
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revised
This one - when first posted a year ago - felt like it was a good idea but too verbose. 12 months later I think I may have finally gotten it right.