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Tadpole

The walk is long, starting at your house,
Counting as you cross each square of sidewalk:
One, two, ten, one hundred
Careful to avoid the cracks

Then you're finally at the road,
The one made of dirt instead of asphalt,
With real, tall trees, branches
That bend over your head, and
Best of all, the creek
Beside the road, in the morning shade,
Always worth exploring, looking
For tadpoles you can put in a jar
And take home, so different
From the lizards in the desert where you're from

They only lost their tails, but tadpoles
Change to something different
Like a magic trick

The way you'll change
After you've walked that road
A hundred times

Past the creek, to the town, the foursquare church,
The corner store selling popsicles shaped like rockets,
The school where no one
Is your friend

Comments

and there she is again!
Welcome back.
This one struck me, not just for the novelty of its appearance after your absence.
The drawing-in, the details expanding a view on a scene---present? past, despite the tense?
And suddenly the wallop at the end!
Is it your story? Is it Benjamin's?
Lovely!

I finally see your comment. Thank you. It's the speaker's story, like all poems. :) It uses some elements of my own past, but fictionalizes a bit. Glad you liked it!

Jenny - so marvelous to see you here again, and writing so very well. Very evocative and poignant.

That was kind of you to say! I wrote it in late September and decided to share, thinking it would spur me to write more ... still waiting for the muse to strike again ...